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Melon's Adventures Part 1 by ~Melon88:iconMelon88:



                                                                    On one peaceful afternoon, a bird that is different from the others was flying peacefully above the fluffy white clouds. Then a very strange flying machine appered by this bird and chased it. The machine made the bird very scared and flew to what it looked like a tropical Island. The machine began throwing ten electricel nets then the bird started to douge a few nets, but then got captured and the net flew inside the machine, and put the bird in a electricel cage. Soon the bird noticed a human walking up to it and said comally"Ah, look what I caught, a new bird species, I've been wanting for one theses for a while" The bird was shock and knew that it was in danger, and knew it had to some how escape, but it sadly did'nt know how. Soon the bird quietly lade out an egg and the egg rolled out of the cage and rolled to the exit door in the machine, but the door was closed. Then the bird knew that the door will soon open and her baby will freely escape out of the machine. This female bird would only want her baby to escape so the human won't see the baby bird and try to capture it. A few mins later the exit door slowly opened and the egg rolled out of the door, quick as a flash. The mother bird then prayed that her baby will be alright and that someone will take care of it. (To be continued)
©2008-2009 ~Melon88
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Author's Comments

I finally figured out how to post literature.
So now I can post all of the parts :w00t:

Maybe I should make the parts longer,
what do you think?

Please read and comment! ^v^

Enjoy!

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:iconunbrokenheartsilvane:
I think it's interesting ^^ Maybe you should make it longer though, it seemed you were kinda rushed.

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Thanks, yeah your right it should be longer, I'll make the next part longer, yeah I was kinda rushing to post it ^^;

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:iconunbrokenheartsilvane:
Good ^^ Can't wait to read it!

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~OkamiFanClub Okami <3

LIFE SUCKS
YOU DON'T

~*..:✿c'est l'amour✿:..*~
:iconmelon88:
Thanks ^v^

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:iconkoolkatt:
Ohh this is quite interseting I cant wait to see the next one. I'll try and help you edit them if you like.
One of ht e best things to do it open microsoft word and write there. (if you have it)

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Thanks Kool katt, sure you can edit them in case I make a mistake.
Well, I only have word pad, I don't have microsoft word.

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:iconkoolkatt:
No prob.
And I dont have microsoft word either I just thought you might ^^;

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:iconmelon88:
Oh, it's okay :hug:

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:iconinvadershelbie:
This is very interesting! :nod:
i like it! =D :+favlove:
it's cute! :heart:

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